Renegade 40,000

As I say in INTRODUCTION, I need and seek aid in my work...I will like to wright that story with help with other W40k fans witch will criticize and adjust my thoughts..............................I`m just trying to expand this glorious SF universe to my environment....will see, maybe I will...hahahaha....anyway, here is something from my story...Librarian Lazarion Nived - State of Fall:.....and we praise our God, the holy Emperor who give us light, guard our souls and guide our path. And his son, our father, the holy Patriarch who made us to become great as he is, protect us and save us from damnation. And his brother, our mentor, the holy messiah who teach us who we are, how to raise a mighty legion and how to wage war. We praise them for their gift to us, gift of faith, faith witch will preserve us in this doomed place. And we stand here as beacon, a light opposing darkness and evil upon us, a light that will guide our brothers to come here and aid us to seal this damned space...

I like the sound of that! Sounds very 40k-ish

Protoyeron Simon, book of “Sarbonitess”, quote:
“Large gigantic figure of man aprouched near our Patriarch and look him in the eyes, directly. That gesture make all of us to bounce! No man can not look our Patriarch directly in his eyes, he will go mad or die instantly. Giant look the Patriarch and step back with shake voice:”Unbelievable!...Svevid!...My brother!...How…”, Patriarch interrupted him: “No brother, my name is Sarbon, but I see that you are from beyond our world and I know that our father send you to find us and to ease your pain…we are ready, I am ready! “